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lucky045
post Sep 9 2007, 08:06 PM
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QUOTE(superpyroman @ Sep 9 2007, 09:02 PM) *

We seem to have drifted away from the forums as well. It could be set in forumville with the anti-villain a very strict Mod who takes away everyones liberties in order to protect them from people saying profanities and such.


Hmm I like it... so the mod is just trying to uphold the rules... and the villain can be an anonymous villain claiming to be the site creator... who sends "suggestions" about new forum rules "for the greater good." The villain could turn out to be Lorna Linley - not just a troll but a truly delusional psychopath.
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post Sep 9 2007, 08:07 PM
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Is there room for a singing swedish chef in the plot?

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post Sep 9 2007, 08:07 PM
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QUOTE(snhs @ Sep 9 2007, 08:37 PM) *

Have the daughter finding the body of the AH leaning against a tree/in a forest?

A tree called Vlad
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post Sep 9 2007, 08:10 PM
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QUOTE(lucky045 @ Sep 9 2007, 09:02 PM) *

Hmm... the villain can be the advisor to the AV... and while the AV just wants to do good, the Villain comes up with evil plans and sells them as wonderfull good deeds.


Good idea, maybe a manipulative prime minister, and as a musical link Machiavelli so we can have a theme with lots of fiddly bits associated with him.

QUOTE(Amber @ Sep 9 2007, 09:07 PM) *

Is there room for a singing swedish chef in the plot?


Maybe they could look out for the daughter and overhear some of th V/AV'S plots.
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post Sep 9 2007, 08:11 PM
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I will update the plot in the morning when I am awake ennough to decipher that lot and string it together in a coherent manner! In the meantime, keep the ideas coming! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
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post Sep 9 2007, 08:24 PM
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So far we have:

-a (Russian) Anti-hero called Dimitri,
-Anti-villian, a very strict mod, who takes away everyones liberties to protect,
-The beautiful daughter of the anti villian (who turns out to be the heroine),
-Villiagers,
-A tree called Vlad,
-A villian adviser to the Anti-villian, manipulative prime minister called Machiavelli.

So far. I think (IMG:style_emoticons/default/unsure.gif) Correct me if I'm wrong

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post Sep 9 2007, 08:55 PM
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QUOTE(frenchyhorn @ Sep 9 2007, 09:24 PM) *

-A villian adviser to the Anti-villian, manipulative prime minister called Machiavelli.

So far. I think (IMG:style_emoticons/default/unsure.gif) Correct me if I'm wrong


Might be better giving him a different name as Machiavelli was a real person, nothing to stop him being a Machiavellian character though.
I'm guessing Machiavellian exercises aren't unique to flute. Are they (IMG:style_emoticons/default/unsure.gif)?
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post Sep 10 2007, 06:24 AM
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The plot update..

1) Forumvillae ruled by the Anti-Villian, who is moderating the forum as usual, but is then swayed by Prime Minister Machiavelli into introducing draconian new rules and commiting huge injustices.

2) The Anti-Hero Falls in love with the daughter of the Anti-Villain. The AH believes that the daughter will marry him, but only if he topples the dictorial reign of her father.

3) So AH duely kills AV and asks the daughter to marry him.

4) But she refuses, and tells him in no uncertain terms that he is an idiot and she hates him etc.

5)Machiavelli is then free to take on the leadership of Forumville, and it becomes an awful place to be. He also forces the daughter to marry him, but she knows what he is doing and hates him.

6) She poisons Machiavelli's food, then goes on to lead the people into an era of unprecedented peace and prosperity, but..

7) She then finds the body of AH, against the roots of a tree that had been carved into an uncanny likeness of herself. He had wasted away from his loneliness, that she hated him.

8) She realizes only then how much she loved him, and commits suicide that they might be together as she now knows they should have been.

I think thats everything... Correct me if I'm wrong!
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post Sep 10 2007, 06:29 AM
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QUOTE(Rosemary7391 @ Sep 10 2007, 07:24 AM) *

The plot update..

1) Forumvillae ruled by the Anti-Villian, who is moderating the forum as usual, but is then swayed by Prime Minister Machiavelli into introducing draconian new rules and commiting huge injustices.

2) The Anti-Hero Falls in love with the daughter of the Anti-Villain. The AH believes that the daughter will marry him, but only if he topples the dictorial reign of her father.

3) So AH duely kills AV and asks the daughter to marry him.

4) But she refuses, and tells him in no uncertain terms that he is an idiot and she hates him etc.

5)Machiavelli is then free to take on the leadership of Forumville, and it becomes an awful place to be. He also forces the daughter to marry him, but she knows what he is doing and hates him.

6) She poisons Machiavelli's food, then goes on to lead the people into an era of unprecedented peace and prosperity, but..

7) She then finds the body of AH, against the roots of a tree that had been carved into an uncanny likeness of herself. He had wasted away from his loneliness, that she hated him.

8) She realizes only then how much she loved him, and commits suicide that they might be together as she now knows they should have been.

I think thats everything... Correct me if I'm wrong!


Morning. That looks like everything to me.
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post Sep 10 2007, 06:31 AM
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post Sep 10 2007, 08:52 AM
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If at any point you have need of a fairy godmother who speaks continuously in rhyme, well, you know where I am! (Have just written the prologue for this year's school panto (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wacko.gif)).
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post Sep 10 2007, 05:39 PM
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Fairy Godmother idea could be someones conscience eg. AH's
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Wow, this looks really good (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

QUOTE(frenchyhorn @ Sep 10 2007, 06:39 PM) *

Fairy Godmother idea could be someones conscience eg. AH's


I think we need a lighter scene somewhere to add a bit of relief from all the death and gloom and suicide, maybe with some fairies (and possibly fairy godmother) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
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Okay... *thinks*
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AH goes mad with lonliness and sees all these faries (IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
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