QUOTE(TSax @ May 14 2007, 09:07 PM)

If I were being critical I'd say that there seems to be a slight tendency to lose the pulse and come adrift from the backing at times, for my ears that would be the number one thing to work on.
Yes, I noticed that myself... I think I need to work on exactly how loud I need the CD to be able to hear it without it being so loud I can't hear myself. I kept noticing at the start of one of them, don't remember which now, that I kept thinking I was on the pulse and then realising I wasn't in these two bar phrases and driving myself potty

That's a good idea about limiting the notes - one of those things I know about in theory but forget to do
I had a go earlier on at playing through, improv and all, without the CD and seeing if I could hear the harmonies in my mind's eye/do an improv without the CD as a safety net. I should try that some more.
Thanks for the feedback - both helpful and encouraging! Much appreciated

ps if you (or indeed anyone else) have any strong views about which you think I play best - I'm not saying I'll definitely take your suggestions

, but ideas on how to narrow this down to 3 would be great!

pps: I haven't exactly divided them into useful "this one's from list A" etc, but just any "don't do that one it doesn't suit you" or "you play that one particularly funkily" would be great