QUOTE(freda_bloogs @ Nov 18 2011, 12:40 PM)

I got some feedback about my proposal yesterday. One line puzzled me:
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Thanks for this draft. I've briefly read through it. I will give you more detailed comments later this week / early next week. Initially, you have a nice and clear writing style! However, although reference to your personal experiences is interesting, it is unfortunately not relevant to your research proposal.
In any guides/how-tos/advice that I've read, they've all stated that you need to show why you, as an applicant, are suitable for this research. I don't know how I can do that without including some sort of personal information.
Any thoughts?
You are writing a research proposal not a personal statement - sounds like you've muddled the two things.
A research proposal should cover the aims and objectives of the project, the gap in knowledge which will be addressed and how the proposed research extends existing work or knowledge, how you intend to do the actual research, the intended research outputs (both academic and policy related plus any community outreach type things if relevant) and ethics.
Edit: For a PhD application the personal experience stuff goes in either the personal statement section of the application form or in a covering letter, dependent on what has been requested. For a proper research proposal or funding application there would be a separate section for your supporting statements and evidence including things like a full list of publications, grants etc. The personal experience stuff should be academic only unless it is essential e.g. for a project exploring mobility issues for young wheelchair users in school settings it would be relevant to say that you have X years experience of voluntary work with children/young people with disabilities including those with mobility problems, it wouldn't be relevant to say that you had taught swimming to primary school aged children. Yes, the latter might have provided transferable skills which you could draw upon, but it isn't directly related to the proposed research.